I see your points and I know it's all well meant.
As you all probrably know english is not my mother tongue so I might have been a bit unclear about what I really meant when I wrote what I did.
1. I was thinking about making a new mix of my song, not alter the original one. I love strings, piano, violin, harp and all the classical instruments. Making a song with only those instruments would be a great challenge for me and is something I have been looking at before. House is also a genre I've looking at before without managing to make a whole song out of it. Why I thougth uncloned's idea was good was because, here I already had a melody to work on and therefore it would maybe be easier to complete classical song.
Harbinger: Actually I think trance and classical has a lot of similarities, thinking about the build-ups in the songs.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NWLagP7Zr_AIf you say this build up couldn't be on a classical song, I strongly disagree. Listen from 3.15.
And as for the second point, as an artist and a person who is posting his songs here on the forum I not here to just get a one-liner review like: this rocks/sucks. As an artist I always want to improve and getting impulses from you guys doesn't only improve the mentioned song but me also as a artist. That's why I listen to other songs to be inspired and I hope maybe I can inspire others too one day. I value your opinons but It doesn't mean that I am going to follow them, overall it is me who are making the song.
And for suggestions, anyone wants to collaborate with me, on making a song with mpdplug tracker? I know two heads are better than one.
Peace out!
And btw I have now given the song a title and also updated the song, please continue to give your comments.
http://nxjthw.blu.livefilestore.com/y1pm3Fp5Sq1d8cq4k46a4O9wR3ea4uhBbv239najzMVw9Tj8mJdVaEk7pupAnUhVFi1c_R-iPzOjbs/ggfv2.mp3?download