[Pop] Alone (MP3)

[bvanoudtshoorn]

A simple piano track with a few pop elements, too. It's been criticised for being a bit too linear; a criticism which I must say I agree with. Nevertheless, I thought I'd put it up here, and get some more opinions.

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[LPChip]

This is a very nice song Barry!

I was hoping for some backing, and at that moment, it actually came! That made it even better.

I disagree that its too linear. I think it should be like this. It really adds to the feeling "Alone". Taking it away will destroy that feeling.

I think you could've add a bit more volume variation to the piano and change notes that are barelly auditable. The first 3 notes you hear when the song starts are repeated alot throughout the song. Changing the volume of the second note to say... v20 will add alot of depth to the song.

You should try it.

[Sam_Zen]

It's indeed 'alone', but with some kind of 'comforting' undertone. Nice.