[UNFINISHED] [Rock] The River of Death (.Ogg)

Started by Asharin, January 25, 2007, 14:45:44

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Asharin

Not totally finished, and may be a while before it is, but I figured I'd post the unfinished version here for any comments :P
http://z0mg.myzen.co.uk/mp3/TheRiverOfDeath.ogg
I am Dyslexic of Borg, resemblance is fertile, your ass will be laminated.

LPChip

Since its unfinished, I've added [UNFINISHED] tag to it.
"Heh, maybe I should've joined the compo only because it would've meant I wouldn't have had to worry about a damn EQ or compressor for a change. " - Atlantis
"yes.. I think in this case it was wishful thinking: MPT is makng my life hard so it must be wrong" - Rewbs

Sam_Zen

So my comments will be unfinished as well. So far :
Good song, but could be made stronger. Quite narrow in the panorama. The drums-part is a bit thin with only one repeated sequence.
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Asharin

Close Sam, there's two slightly different drum parts, but they are very close that it might not be obvious. Please define 'Quite narrow in the panorama' ? :)
I am Dyslexic of Borg, resemblance is fertile, your ass will be laminated.

Sam_Zen

I must admit that I listened once, so a slight difference could not have been noticed.
With narrow panorama I mean that most sounds do have quite a centered position between left and right. Only some delays effects seem to come from the sides.
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