[UNFINISHED] [Rock] The River of Death (.Ogg)

[Asharin]

Not totally finished, and may be a while before it is, but I figured I'd post the unfinished version here for any comments
http://z0mg.myzen.co.uk/mp3/TheRiverOfDeath.ogg

[LPChip]

Since its unfinished, I've added [UNFINISHED] tag to it.

[Sam_Zen]

So my comments will be unfinished as well. So far :
Good song, but could be made stronger. Quite narrow in the panorama. The drums-part is a bit thin with only one repeated sequence.

[Asharin]

Close Sam, there's two slightly different drum parts, but they are very close that it might not be obvious. Please define 'Quite narrow in the panorama' ?

[Sam_Zen]

I must admit that I listened once, so a slight difference could not have been noticed.
With narrow panorama I mean that most sounds do have quite a centered position between left and right. Only some delays effects seem to come from the sides.