[Synthpop] - Break of Day (MP3) 80's dark & gothic-style

[Andy Livid]

Shortly: Very emotional and dark synthpop.

Song name: Break of Day
Genre: synthpop
File format: mp3
File size: 5,78 MB
Kbps: 160

Link to download:

http://www.mikseri.net/music/play.php?id=202075&type=dl

Lyrics (with all grammar-faults):

Am I too severe to myself?
Or can not find anywhere self-discipline?

The lack of desire,
which lives inside these concrete walls,
a great change to turn my back
on time.

I drown on the mornings into the waves
which can't be seen.
And turn so cold as the break of day,
but not afraid,
to shiver when the wind blows,
on my face.

Voice in the room
is my doubting thought.
Now I'm tired all alone
in two dimensions.

Drifting on the edge,
your're in prison
but still be free.
It's like clouds passing by,
bringing water when they cry.

I drown on the mornings into the waves
which can't be seen.
And turn so cold as the break of day,
and not afraid.

A great division of good and bad,
anticipates.
The false commitments will never last,
when I need them.
To get back those who's nearly been,
a real.

I drown on the mornings into the waves...
And turn so cold as the break of day...
Break of day...
As the break of day.

There are many other good songs made with ModPlug Tracker on my artist page:

www.mikseri.net/andylivid

Thank you!

[Andy Livid]

What you think about this?

[Haikz]

This sounds very polished and professional, even. The song flows very cleanly and I didn't notice any flaws. The melody at some 2:24 and 4:10 sounds excellent and builds up the atmosphere nicely.
I rated it 9.

[apple-joe]

Shortly: Very emotional and dark synthpop.

Song name: Break of Day
Genre: synthpop
File format: mp3
File size: 5,78 MB
Kbps: 160

Link to download:

http://www.mikseri.net/music/play.php?id=202075&type=dl

Lyrics (with all grammar-faults):

Am I too severe to myself?
Or can not find anywhere self-discipline?

The lack of desire,
which lives inside these concrete walls,
a great change to turn my back
on time.

I drown on the mornings into the waves
which can't be seen.
And turn so cold as the break of day,
but not afraid,
to shiver when the wind blows,
on my face.

Voice in the room
is my doubting thought.
Now I'm tired all alone
in two dimensions.

Drifting on the edge,
your're in prison
but still be free.
It's like clouds passing by,
bringing water when they cry.

I drown on the mornings into the waves
which can't be seen.
And turn so cold as the break of day,
and not afraid.

A great division of good and bad,
anticipates.
The false commitments will never last,
when I need them.
To get back those who's nearly been,
a real.

I drown on the mornings into the waves...
And turn so cold as the break of day...
Break of day...
As the break of day.

There are many other good songs made with ModPlug Tracker on my artist page:

www.mikseri.net/andylivid

Thank you!

This piece really had something on its own. I enjoyed the atmosphere; noticed it from the very beginning. Nice, melodic - yet dark - mood.
And the vocals... What to say? I was surprised by the character. It was very soulful. I noticed a few lyrical details, but I reacted on the grammar, not the content.