[Trance] Waiting on You, Waiting on Me (aka Tick Tock v3.0) (Stream) Critique

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Here's a song for you. It still feels off to me, but let me know if you detect the same thing. Currently, it's only streamable (here too), since I can't get to my computer right now. However, later on, I'll add the downloadable song file.

Nevertheless, enjoy!