[Indie/Pop] Sneak Out Make Out (mp3) Includes vocals

Started by blain, July 29, 2009, 04:43:48

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blain

Sneak Out Make Out

http://www.bluebloomer.com/blains_music/blain_hosford__sneak_out_make_out.mp3

The backing for this track is entirely modtracked with some vsts. Vocals have been recorded and mixed over the top.

The track uses a range of instruments including piano, jovica ep, glockenspiel, strings, wave oscillators, beats and a few other things.

Vocals were quite complex to work on. Many equalized interweaving tracks fighting for space.

It's supposed to be a fun and stupid song about young lovers doing what young lovers do...

TheEagle

First of all: Welcome to this forum, blain.


Due to my bad english I understood only fragments of the lyrics. So I can't say anything about it.
But the sound of the vocals and the way they're set into the music is (from my point of view) outstanding...
I'm really excited! :D

Great work, blain!

blain

Thank you for listening! I am glad you enjoyed.

Here is a transcript of the lyrics:


SNEAK OUT MAKE OUT

VERSE 1
waiting after dark
to see if you are there
you're there
whisper as i climb
your window's opened wide
so wide

we'll sneak out in the night
as quiet as tip toes make on grass
we'll drink and watch the moon
i hear she stole the spoon

how?

(and then she's taking it off...)

CHORUS
the red is in her eyes
the red is on her kiss
on her breath
but the morning comes to fast
i gotta get her back to school
or they'll say

VERSE 2
young girls should know better
keep those legs together girl
dirty boys are clever
you should know heaven has your love
footsteps coming closer
here comes wendy

BREAKDOWN
listen
dont tell her teacher cause she'll tell her mother
i said 'a dont tell her mother cause she'll tell her father
i said 'a don't tell her father that she has a lover
cause he'll put me under

BRIDGE
has she gone away?
and she says baby
babe who cares?

CHORUS
the red is in her eyes
the red is on her kiss
on her breath
but the morning comes to fast
i gotta get her back to school
or they'll say

OUTRO
where have you been?
what have you done?
where is he gone?
what was it worth?
when will you learn?

you stupid girl

i gotta get her back to school...

PaleWinter

Man, I love your music, I've been listening to it everyday. Congrats!!

All this "music stuff" is new for me, and I can tell you are an inspiring artist for an aspiring artist.  8)
"My music is where I'd like you to touch"
--  Cansei de Ser Sexy (CSS)

Sam_Zen

hmm.. typical spam text..

Yep, first, welcome blain..!
This is a very mature production. Enjoyed.
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uncloned

this is quite good. where have you've been hiding?

I like the lyrics and vocals - they steal front and center - however the backing track is tastefully done and could stand on its own (if a bit shorter).

My hat's off to you.

Nahkranoth

Not my cup of tea, but I must say that the quality is outstanding! Music is seemingly simple but I can hear a lot of work behind it :gjob:
I like the compression on drum track and glockenspiel thingy sound, quite unexpected it is.
As for the expectations, I was ready for some punk-rock-like song judging by the lyrics, but I'm glad that it turned out to be not like that.
Thanks, blain, and welcome!

blain

Thank you for your comments and thanks for the welcome.
I have some other tracks made with modtracker.
I'll post a few more soon.