[Dance/Trance] Left Unsatisfied (mp3) (Mirror added)

[TheEagle]

This is some simple dance-stuff with a nice sounding lead-synth and a tiny melody:

Left Unsatisfied

Mirror (right click-->save as..)

I made this song with OpenModPlug Tracker 1.17

Greetz
The Eagle

[psishock]

as you've said, the lead synth sounds nice, i personally would play with bass a bit more, would add some more variations in the melody and to the background sounds. Maybe could introduce some ear cutting hihat work... :wink:
The whole feel will sound less "monotonic" that way, but its still a nice song.
Let's hear some more electronic stuff from you in the future.

[TheEagle]

as you've said, the lead synth sounds nice, i personally would play with bass a bit more, would add some more variations in the melody and to the background sounds. Maybe could introduce some ear cutting hihat work... :wink:
The whole feel will sound less "monotonic" that way, but its still a nice song.
Let's hear some more electronic stuff from you in the future.

(sorry for my bad english)

Thank you for your feedback.
Well, this is not really my kind of music. My brother asked me, if I could do some techno-stuff (he loves techno & dance-stuff). And I thought:"Ok. I'll try..."
If your interested in some of my older songs and if you think, you're able to forget you RapidShare-dislike for a short time ;-), you may click on the "www"-button below...

Greetings
The Eagle

[Sam_Zen]

I can hear that's it's not your kind of music. It's quite clichematic.
Btw : please don't use dots in the filename. It's asking for some occasional system trouble.

[Harbinger]

Notes as i'm listening:

Nice build effect, drumbeat too quiet for dance music but good at establishing understood tempo, decent house timbres, my ears expected the main melodic line to vary in rhythmic structure, but i was...

... left unsatisfied