[Soundtrack] The Ignoble Road (.mp3 download)

[TennMusMakerAdam]

http://download927.mediafire.com/je7jqxvik6ng/hkl4c451s8dyd7e/The+Ignoble+Road.mp3

Please tell me what you think, and what I can do to improve this piece.

[bvanoudtshoorn]

An interesting piece. I quite like how it becomes more melodic (and less dissonant) as it progresses, as the main theme is more firmly established, and developed.

I think that your percussion could be a little more prominent -- it sounds as though it's sitting a little too far back in the mix, particularly when you bring in the sustained strings.