[Dream Trance] Roll me over (.mp3)

[Rakib]

Was working on a another track that I've been working on a long time. No progression means try something else, so I started on a new track.

Got a nice lead synth and worked from there. Finished the song in few hours.
Everything here is sample-based except the lead, no other vst's.

If I find a sample lead that can take over the vst I plan to release this as a modplug file, but till now it is going to be mp3.



Rakib - Roll me over

[Oliwerko]

It's well done technically, you chose good sounds.

But the rhythm created by the percussion is something I can't get over, it doesn't work for me, sorry.

Apart from that, for a sample-based track, it's nicely done.

[Saga Musix]

But the rhythm created by the percussion is something I can't get over, it doesn't work for me, sorry.

Same here. The Rhythm in the at the beginning sounds horribly out of sync for me, because it not obvious what's on-beat and what's off-beat. Apart from that, this tune is rather nice and dreamy.

[Rakib]

The beginning was made that way by purpose, the bass is pitched up and down to sound weird. And the build up with the other instruments was to have a special sound to show that even with these weird instruments you can get nice results. But another alternative I was thinking about was to just remove the first minute, looks like you guys agree on that.

[Saga Musix]

Well, it would probably sound alot better with some beat indication, for example a highpassed bass drum or whatever.