What is your opinion on this piece?

[TennMusMakerAdam]

http://www.mediafire.com/?ca8asza74ycjrs8

I know that I still have a lot to learn about making music, so I wanted some input.  I think this is one of my better pieces, and I can't find anything immediately wrong with it (though I would like to add in some flute melodies, and it seems like it needs to have more complicated melodies all around).

I think it sounds good, personally, but I want it to sound more than good.  How do you guys think I can add that special something to this?

[psishock]

Our options may be revealed, if this will be posted on the correct forum area: http://forum.openmpt.org/index.php?board=6.0&sid=3fb0c8e2bf97b27f0f78b394240dead8

This is the General Chatter, not the place for reviews.

[TennMusMakerAdam]

Hmm I see.  I know what you're saying, but the point of posting it here was that the song wasn't finished yet, so I didn't really want to put it out in the Free Music Downloads section.  Just looking for some more experienced trackers to give me their two cents.

But if you insist,  I guess I guess I'll move the topic.  Go ahead and delete this topic if you have the admin powers to do so.