Weird genre, huh? That's how I'm going to classify this piece.
http://haikz.org/cs.mp3
It's short and I spent not more than an hour making it, but I like it and feel it's complete. The guitar was played and sampled by me.
Listening as I'm writing. Fresh drumming. Dark guitar. Suddenly a cleaner melody appeared and provided a good contrast. Then the darker sound returned. I have to point at the drums once more. Perhaps the most interesting part - the 'spark'.
It's short indeed and normally I have no problem with that. But you could at least have added some intro, considering the potential of your instruments. Nice choice for a cycle of five though.
I would qualify your music as trash-experimental-underground rock. It seems to fit well for a live set. Sound is dirt (dit you mean it to be like that ?). I do not really like the toms rolls in yout battery score. It unbalance too much the groove. But we can also decide that's a part of this subversive style.
AppO
:)