Author Topic: [Ambient] A Moment's Rest (mp3, soundcloud) Critique Requested  (Read 1359 times)

Offline I-S3-O

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I kind of need some help with this song. I'm trying to fill it out with some more ideas, but I'm not sure how to complete it. It feels like something's missing, and I'm trying to see where I can add some breaks to make it a little more interesting.

Here's the song: A Moment's Rest, and the .it file is included as well.

Once fixed, I'll upload the fixed version here. Thanks for the help.

EDIT: I've fixed it! Here's the new versions of the mp3 and .it files. You can also check it out on soundcloud.
« Last Edit: March 08, 2018, 09:53:50 by I-S3-O »

Offline Saga Musix

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Re: [Ambient] A Moment's Rest (mp3) Critique Requested
« Reply #1 on: March 07, 2018, 22:31:12 »
I don't really think that anything is missing to call it complete, but if you want a random idea: add some bigger, fatter pads for chords to complement the rather thin pads occasionally. Make the track shine from time to time!
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Re: [Ambient] A Moment's Rest (mp3) Critique Requested
« Reply #2 on: March 08, 2018, 06:43:32 »
Thanks so much for your input! I'll hold on to that nugget. I think I may already have another idea for something else that may use what you're suggesting.

Oh! and I think I found a way to fix it; check the OP.
« Last Edit: March 08, 2018, 09:54:43 by I-S3-O »